Sleeping Valor

Some words of advice: be careful how you try to physically describe him. This is always tricky. All we know now is that his eyes are blue, and that didn't ...

Someone said that prologues are used to explain something that happened in the past, so perhaps Megium isn't the hero of the story, but a past hero (if that makes ...

It started off quite bland and confusing( this is probably cs you didnt describe his situation or destanation that clearly)but the more i read , the better it got , ...

I'm reading! I can wait. Glad to see you know where you're going with this. ^_^

Okie. I went over this and think I fixed all typos. Now working on revised version which is in a new thread (Blakdrealm I). Thanks for the crits. Always welcoming ...

Sorry haven't read this until now. Got caught up in some school work and didn't get the chance to go online recently. I can only suggest that if you wanted ...

Isn't Yellow Card the name of a band...? Not that I know of. I don't really know why I picked that for the title, I plan on changing it later. ...

Here's the next bit. I'm not as happy with it as the first; I could definitely use some advice on how to make it better. ☺☼► For three years Jeffery ...

after all the times i've shout someone came to lead me out *hugs* It's so sweet it makes you want to go and help somebody. Great poem.

To jchoufani, you need to fix some parts in your writings. sometimes there are just pieces of a word in sentence. on some words your forget like three letters. one ...

Woo. Interesting plot. I like where this is going. Keep it up. :wink:

p.s how long did it take to write all this ? Hm...I worked on it over the evening but I was interupted a couple times. I'd say absolutely no more ...

-I'm still working out the connection between Saase and Earth. I have an idea on how to work it into the story, but for the moment I'll leave the prologue ...

Glad you liked it. Yes, I did make the font a little large. I'll change it back to a smaller font when I'm fully happy with it. I find ti ...

By separating the text, do you mean pressing 'enter' and going to a new line, or puting an indendation in the text periodically? I never was good at 'seperating the ...